Jaideep ji, the ideas and flow is very nice! Your understanding of the Raag is quite comprehensive! I would ask you to pay attention to the little nuances in your finger movements. Specially in your meends. I feel they can sound a little more detailed and timed better also.

Also, try to use Tatkaar in your taans and Jhaala. It will communicate your thoughts better to the listener. Rest, we shall discuss in the meet! 🙂