The rhythm aspect is very much on point. But during this entire recording, you seem to have lost focus of the Tanpura. That makes most of the komal notes a little off key and some places even some of the khatkas are sounding jerky. The root Sa itself was sharp. My apologies for the delayed response, and special apologies for the ‘to the point’ (curt) response. Because I have heard much better pitching from you, I feel it is a matter of practicing the method of focussing on the Sur itself. Kindly attempt again, and this time I shall strive to respond a lot sooner 🙂

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